hey I need some feedback on these please...

V1 - http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=59514
V2 - http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=60229
V3 - http://www.wikiupload.com/download_page.php?id=60258

Each link is the same thing but slightly different versions - 1 being the original and then 2 and 3.
Personally i like the first one but it seems too crowded sometimes, so in v2 i cut some of one track out. I think it's good like that but a friend told me to just see what it was like with just one solo track so that's what v3 is.

So:
V1 - Track 1+2+3
V2 - Track 1+2(edited)+3
V3 - Track 1+3 only

It's my first recording so it's not perfect.... tracks 2 and 3(the solo tracks) were off the top of my head as well.

Anyway which do you think is the best? or if you don't like any of them feel free to say why as well

I prefer the third one.

The first one has some moments of brilliance though. It's cool how it kind of sounds incohesive, and then everything pulls together at points. There are just times where it's a little too incohesive and becomes noise.

The second one is a little more cohesive overall, but it also seems to be missing whatever that really stood out in the first one.

The third one lacks the brilliance of the first, but overall it seems to flow the best of the three.

It's hard to say after one listen wether the problems here are because of what you played, or the actual recording quality. I'm no expert on recording, but it does sound like you were recording it a little too loud for whatever mic or input you were using.

It might help to lower the track volume of the track you did the droning and chord stuff on. Also it would definitely help if you seperated the two solo tracks more, so you'd have one solo coming 3/4 out of the right speaker and the other 3/4 out of the left.

Either way, very cool idea I'd definitely be interested in hearing more of that kind of stuff.